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Whispers of the Soul |
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~*DrAgOnFLY*~ Junior Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 29Haven of Abyss |
Her secrets locked away Inside her fragile heart Releases her fears Soul flies apart Million pieces Ragged, shattered glass Her ghost collects the shards Of future, present, past The last of her is fading A whisper on the wind Hold dear the memories Sheltered safe within Keep her alive Close to your heart Forever in your soul Always in your heart |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
welcome to pip hope to see more of you "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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Asian Rain Member
since 2003-10-11
Posts 73 |
Welcome to the forum! It's a wonderful place to post your own work and read works by other dark poets. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
hey chik =) this is Bonns. =) i love seeing someone i know here, this is awsome. =) luv u luv u luv u luv u!!!! lol, ok, sorry, i'm prolly gonna embarris u if i keep it up, lol. i dig this poem a lot...it's sad...but good. the second verse is solid. however, i thought the ending could use some work...some how rhyming "heart" with "heart" doesn't sound right to me. oh well. that's just me. otherwise, i luv it. =) Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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*Inque Monroe* Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43No where special |
Hey, once again its sad and I get the feeling once again its from personal experience, this one is written very well I think and gives alot of images, I like it, her poems always seem sad and kind of dark, which is not a bad thing, once again keep it up Cay. |
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