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brezee
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since 2003-06-02
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0 posted 2004-09-12 12:28 PM


Bored as ever as I just sit
Wondering when the scythe will swing by
Looking through dark or shallow drifts
Yet, I’m not waiting for the day that I die

This is not about suicide
It’s just a little ditty
I guess then you decide
But my thoughts of that are itty bitty

So black and bright
My thoughts are gone tonight
Sit and stare insane
As nothing passes through my brain

Ebony with white polka dots,
It’s what I see on the screen
No, I promise, I’m not on pot
I’m always this way, ever so clean

This would make no sense at all
If I hadn’t written it myself
And I’d try to say it, but I have no balls
So I’ll fold it up, and hide it on a shelf.


~i honestly don't remember writing this but, i found it so...here is it...yay~

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-09-12 12:34 PM


LOL, your mind is working overtime, and is asking for a good night's sleep..
brezee
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since 2003-06-02
Posts 140

2 posted 2004-09-12 12:36 PM


well...haha now that i think of it, it probably was a time like that...thanx for reading it...


~*brezee*~

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2004-09-13 04:42 PM


Hey brezee,

sounds like you have been reading
Dr. Suess . . .

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