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PainBaneChaos
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since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return

0 posted 2004-09-09 04:06 PM


It's funny how you've always said,
my strength would get me through.
And now i'm the one in need of help,
and I see a whole new side of you.
You bruised my tender ribs,
kicked me when I was down.
Spit in the dirt by my face,
through your condescending frown.
You told me I was weak,
I should do it on my own.
But when you needed help,
you just picked up the phone.
So don't tell me I'm not strong,
maybe you're weaker than you know.
If you couldn't help yourself,
why must you keep me low?

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kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-09-09 05:28 PM


Awesome! I absoluetly loved this!

Amazing write. I feel ya!

Karissa


I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

brezee
Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140

2 posted 2004-09-09 10:07 PM


YAYUH! awesome possum! this is totally cool...been there...but i believe it makes us all the more stronger (buffness!) haha. again, awesome write!


~*brezee*~

vampiana
Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere
3 posted 2004-09-10 12:02 PM


absolutely, insanely, out of this WORLD awesome...to put it lightly...
dodge_chick2003
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since 2004-01-18
Posts 136
California
4 posted 2004-09-11 06:45 PM


I can relate to this. This is how my grandma(I live with her) treats me. Keep posting

PainBaneChaos
Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return
5 posted 2004-09-14 04:49 PM


Well, thank you muchly.  This was a rant about a few girls at my school.  They were supposed to be my best friends, and they all ganged up on me.  So, instead of ripping their faces off slowly, I wrote.  
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