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Purity
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since 2001-11-20
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Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2004-09-09 10:23 AM



What's that you carry in your hands?
Hiding from me as you've buffed it about carelessly
I've tried many a time to catch a mere glimpse
Curious as to what you have
For many years, I've observed you at play
Tossing this thing around as would a big cat
Teasing...taunting...batting...scratching
To most it would be a humorous spectacle, but me?
I grow tired.
Chess is still a boring game,
Even when it's a big cat pushing the pawn further away
Or reeling it back in - closer just for fun.
Finally, you choose to prove
Big cats aren't the ones killed by curiosity
As you drop your plaything on the ground
And walk away, no longer amused or interested.
And so I see it for the first time
There on the ground...
The remnants of what once was... my heart.
Broken and unrecognizable even to me,
Except for the faintest of sound in a solitary beat.

Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself...

© Copyright 2004 Carrigan Chantz - All Rights Reserved
wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2004-09-09 02:40 PM


Yep, they can be hell on the furniture too.

Drop me a line...let me know how the book is coming


Ed

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-09-09 05:30 PM


Book? Hmm..when it comes i would love to know.

Amazing write. I loved it.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

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