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mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883


0 posted 2004-08-31 02:56 PM



You say you know,
as others shine-off metallic perception.
Sunday skies,
following round rubber caravans.
You say you know,
spoiled by the loss of pain.
Opened books,
a classroom splendor.
You say you know,
Termination,
green tailed buds,
to blood pumping gray matter.
You say you know,
When the Sun decides
the light and dark.
Bored remnants of repetition.
You say you know,
death, each time
the sleepy covers roll.
Only to wake, and
maybe again.
You say you know,
do you beg?

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2004-08-31 03:24 PM


OMG your writing has grown so much -
I have missed you . . .
this reminds me of two writers
(beat):

the great Jack Kerouac and Saul Williams . . .

you must read if you havent, I adore
the constantly switching of ideals here

brilliant

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

2 posted 2004-09-01 08:22 AM


Hey lw, like old times. Thought I'd throw this out to see what you thought. Been in other sites mostly. Try the other site I gave you, I think you'll like it. The best.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2004-09-01 05:08 PM


*smile* will do and I adore this write,
will check that site out soon - promise . . .

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

4 posted 2004-09-01 09:10 PM


Thank you lw, you were always one of the few who do. Good to have you back.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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