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~K~
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since 2004-07-27
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0 posted 2004-08-29 07:03 AM



I do not exist...
this is just a test
failure is assured
give a damn
if you can
if there's anything left
inside your chest
that beats in spite of her

© Copyright 2004 ~K~ - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2004-08-29 07:08 AM


I like your style, lady.



You say so much more with less.

I'll be watching you.

(I tendta study folks.)


muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
2 posted 2004-08-29 07:14 AM




..this hurts...sooo much

Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
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3 posted 2004-08-30 03:26 AM


Shakes head in amazement. You're dominating this board. I love it.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
4 posted 2004-08-31 03:14 AM


wow

absolutely amazing

i cant beleiev i havent posted to yours before! WOW!

LOR

"When i close my eyes, i remember how to smile, under my umbrella im an accomplished exile..."

littlewing
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5 posted 2004-08-31 03:36 PM


ha ha OMG you have the true makings
of a mad poet . . .I LOVE this K . . .
brilliant


Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
6 posted 2004-08-31 05:41 PM


Waxing poetic in such a vivid, sharp and yet sardonically short is a gift you possess par excellent! Kudos... and ouch!

Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself...

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
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nowhere special
7 posted 2004-08-31 07:05 PM




Amazing...i must agree...makings of a very mad poet..lol

I love how you say so much, with so little.

Karissa

Laney
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since 2002-12-18
Posts 85
Illinois
8 posted 2004-08-31 09:47 PM


very nice..to the point and sharp tounged
~K~
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since 2004-07-27
Posts 148

9 posted 2004-09-02 02:34 AM


Wow. Thank you all so much. I am totally in love with this board & I think you're all awesome. Be seeing you soon!
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