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Dark Poetry #4

The dawn of the Darkness

AndrewDickinson
New Member

since 2004-08-26

Posts 5

0 posted 2004-08-26 06:48 AM

The dawn of the Darkness
To die at Midnight
A black Crow perched above
The luminous Light

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2004-08-29 06:21 PM

First, let me welcome you to Piptalk, Andrew!
It's good to have you here. I've been around for about a year, learning about myself and others. It's nice to express things in writing that might not otherwise be expressed. Hope to see more of your writing. Your poem is very well written and interesting. Enjoyed reading.
miscellanea

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-08-30 03:22 AM

Welcome to PIP! You'll love it. Great first post, too short for your talent, hope to see more!

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2004-08-31 03:27 PM

Andrew!

This is amazing!

it reminds me of Morrison, you know?
fleeting thoughts which form a whole.

You nearly have a senryu here:
5-7-5 . . . three lines

Welcome to the dark . . .

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