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MellonCollie
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since 2003-04-11
Posts 117
Austria,Europe

0 posted 2003-10-15 04:55 PM


well, it's been some time since I posted something in here...latley i was feein' kinda blue angain, so i wrote this on...


often think i’m dead inside
can’t feel happiness nor pain
so many nights I’ve cried
about my lost feelings
which all died

drowning my pain in liquor
trying to erase the memories
hoping to forget these feelings quicker
but only feeding my pain


how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

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eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2003-10-15 05:21 PM


good start, wheres the rest, i think this could be continued

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

MellonCollie
Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117
Austria,Europe
2 posted 2003-10-15 05:44 PM


it's true it could be continued, and it's kinda short, but I liked it, so...maybe i continue it someday

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

Defective
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since 2003-09-19
Posts 73
Salisbury NC
3 posted 2003-10-15 08:20 PM


How can your pain be healed if you drink it all away?
I feel ya

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