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PainBaneChaos
Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return

0 posted 2004-08-23 07:29 PM


When the curtain's finally closed,
and the applause has died away,
will anyone ever remember?
Every good act I've done, the few,
dies with the benefactor.
And every smile I bestowed, the few,
fades into No One's memory.
And when all is said and done,
there's only unremarkable Me.
Alone in my room.
scribbling unimportant nothings.
Listening to music to rip out guts with,
staring at the paint that will peel away,
turn to dust at my fingertips,
and No One will remember.

© Copyright 2004 Chaos - All Rights Reserved
silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-08-25 01:36 AM


woah... okay now everyone says this in reply to your poems but, its like you've read my mind...

i love your work. and i've sed it so many times. AND REMEMBER TO SEND ME THE CD! lol
great poem

LOR

"When i close my eyes, i remember how to smile, under my umbrella im an accomplished exile..."

PainBaneChaos
Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return
2 posted 2004-09-02 01:47 PM


*scurries off to write it down that she has to send the CD* Although, the way it's looking, you may be the only one to get it and it may have only me on it.  The band ganged up on me.
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2004-09-07 02:11 PM


Hey Chaos:

you know I have run this through me
head so many times, I often wondered
how or if I would be remembered.

I do not know why this was way down here . . .

KuruShio
Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110

4 posted 2004-09-07 02:57 PM


i don't know why we all hurt the same, but few can put it into words so true.

"What i do, i want to reverberate, throughout the ages of humanity."

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.  
KuruShio  (DeadlyBob)

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