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Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

0 posted 2004-08-22 04:04 AM



Must have been a lot of pain
to make you want to end that way
It must have been a heavy weight
to hold you down while you suffocate

For, even though the floor
was well within your reach
you never even tried
to get back on your feet

It might as well be yesterday
I stood with them, beside your grave
hating each of them who knew you
better than I'd get the chance to

It still does not make sense
What could I have done?
Was I too blind to see
that you so badly needed someone?

For, even though the floor
was well within your reach
you never even tried
to get back on your feet

And even though the years
keep passing underneath
I still don't want to let myself
admit that you are lost to me

And yet, through weary tears
I beseech you, "Rest In Peace"

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

© Copyright 2004 Shay D. - All Rights Reserved
Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2004-08-22 10:03 AM


woah.
this gave me chils.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-08-22 11:13 PM


Terribly sad. But the poem was amazing, and the rhyming fitted it well.

Hollow.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

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