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SuperGlueRyan
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0 posted 2003-12-12 04:15 AM


Another cold night,
a twist of the wrist,
flick of a switch,
reveals that you
were but a dream.

[This message has been edited by SuperGlueRyan (12-12-2003 04:18 AM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-12-12 04:53 AM


sad

~may all your dreams come true~

Allysa
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2 posted 2003-12-12 02:57 PM


*raises eyebrow*

are you okay?

LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-12-12 03:10 PM




ouch...this one hurts...hugs

SuperGlueRyan
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4 posted 2003-12-12 05:44 PM


This isn't really meant to be a sad piece. I wasn't feeling meloncholy or deppressed. In fact I was in a good mood, this is more a statment of just how it is.
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