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Heart In Distress
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Heart In Distress |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Let's see how I can work the crowd with a good ol fashioned rock song.... Heart In Distress I like the way you plan your moves struttin in your leather boots. your shadowed eyes search the room You never flinch when I'm near you you entertain me from a groove Where you're sheltered from the truth Chorus: You sit in the corner in a low cut dress You got legs for miles my mind's in a mess Smoke femme cigars n blow out a kiss. Playin the Devil but your heart's in distress It's so strange this life you lead lost in the land of make believe where novel tales inspire your dreams. But that's the way you play your game painted nails n long gold chains with lacquered lips a fashion dame. Chorus: You sit in the corner in a low cut dress You got legs for miles my mind's in a mess Smoke femme cigars n blow out a kiss. Playin the Devil but your heart's in distress (Slower part music low) I'd love to see your long black hair across my pillow everywhere imagine how I could change you there. Chorus: You sit in the corner in a low cut dress You got legs for miles my mind's in a mess Smoke femme cigars n blow out a kiss. Playin the Devil but your heart's in distress |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well now that I've had my morning workout to this catchy tune... I'll tell you...I love it!! Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome Would have enjoyed the music to go with it. Well done. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You got legs for miles my mind's in a mess ==================== HI E-BABES!!!!  you rock and it rolls me.  So good to read you...the moth aint here much these days...but Im glad I didnt miss this. Me and Sen and Martie better get our tamborines ready if your gonna rock the house. I can remember Forever December, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You rock and I roll! Then you roll and I rock! Yeppers, you got me rockin' and a rollin'! ~ and a jivin' and a strollin'!  Happy morning! Linda |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
awesome write! i would love to hear this put to music. you are not only a fantastic poet, but an awesome lyricist! take care. amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Enchantress gald you could get the workout...I appreciate the comments. Sy Thanks for dropping in and commenting....Wish I had the music ready but alas....I appreciate your response all the same. Janet Janet Janet How long has it been.....I haven't read one of your beautiful works of art for a long long time. So good to hear from you. Yeah you girls could be called the Pip Singers.....Not sure that sounds too flattering though. Wish you'd have been here a while ago when I posted "Working This Place Alone" it's sort of right up your alley. So great to read one of your exuberant responses once again. Take care Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Linda Thanks for the rockin n rollin you made me smile wide one. I appreciate the read and the response. Amy Those are such kind words....You kinda snuck in on me while I was replying to the others. I appreciate the positive input. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
WOOHOO you rock babe  8.gif"> |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love this, Eric. I would love to hear it to music, too. This is my e-mail if you have it to music. I'd really like to hear it....... ethel_gg@msn.com Happy Holidays,  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty cool |
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