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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-12-10 06:37 AM


Come, come into my life.Though the clock ticks,we will live our world of love in suspended anaimation, in our own bubble.

Nothing will invade us, we will shine for the world to see, for us and our love there will be no trouble.

What perfect people we would be together.
Warm and cmforting,strong and supportive, when i think of you and your beauty, i simply marvel.

The world of love was made for you and me.
Distant lands, beautiful forests and verdant fields of flowers, me and my beautiful woman will travel.

Take my hand, come with me, let us find our Eden.

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Obscurity
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In A Melancholic Dream
1 posted 2003-12-10 06:43 AM


That's a might fine piece there

I am the sunless dawn...

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2003-12-10 06:46 AM


Obscurity thank you for your kind words....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-12-10 06:49 AM


Your hand i clasp, looking into your eyes,
smiling at you..you smiling back at me...
help me to walk away from the frustrations of the world, let us travel through the time together inside loves eden...our eden of love!

To Adam From EVE

xxxxxx love~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2003-12-10 07:07 AM


Together we would live in a perpetual Eden my precious love..love

Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxx

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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5 posted 2003-12-10 08:00 AM


beautifully written and expressed, god bless you both and merry Christmas..you both possess the greatest gift bestowed to mankind, the golden chalice...the most fragrant wine.  
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2003-12-10 10:01 PM


Thank you Lee your so sweet! Thanks for repling to our poetry to eachother....would like to see more replies to goldenroses poetry..he is such a romantic , heartfelt, poet....

Merry Christmas to you!

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

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