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Open Poetry #30
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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling
0 posted 2003-11-24 08:55 AM

Pushed and pulled
by many fools
who learn so fast
in hard knock schools

who burn so fast
in self made fires
who learn so fast
with self made pyres

pushed and shoved
they never learn
I'll push and push
until they burn

I'll shove until
they walk away
and I'll not lose
on their best day

so push you fool
and feel the wrath,
but understand
the aftermath
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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-11-24 08:57 AM

Jason,
Interesting write, enjoyed.
Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
2 posted 2003-11-24 09:27 AM

thanks Sy, bad day at work

Jason
Brad Majors
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Georgia
3 posted 2003-11-24 09:55 AM

well done
Gina Culliney
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4 posted 2003-11-25 03:44 PM

So I take it you don't like it when being pushed, huh?  A good warning for those around you and as usual, Darkling, wonderfully penned.
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