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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-12-08 08:34 PM




Actively alluding
to elusive illusions
and obvious alliterations
often obliterates obfuscation,
obviating the need to
obliterate opportunistic oratories.






© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2003-12-08 08:41 PM


Thank you...my head is now spinning.  

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2 posted 2003-12-08 08:42 PM


you are most welcome, sweet puppy

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3 posted 2003-12-08 08:57 PM


You can say that again!
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

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4 posted 2003-12-08 09:46 PM


LOL, Nancy, I had trouble reading it outloud when I wrote it
thanks for grinning with me

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5 posted 2003-12-08 10:45 PM


ALLITERATION ALERT!!!  

I'M MOTH GIDDY!!!!!!!  

very cool Kacy-girl!!!

btw ...
(the always tardy moth was in prose today)

I can remember Forever December,
The center of dying ... the heart of the pain.
The stars surround me ... the cold astounds me.

Tabitha's Secret

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6 posted 2003-12-08 10:48 PM


thanks JM! prose...hmmm, maybe it's time to get my lazy pen out again, as well as catch up on my reading list?
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7 posted 2003-12-08 10:59 PM


All are aware an analysis arises as admirable.  Awesome address.
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8 posted 2003-12-08 11:46 PM


You have a way with words that's for sure! How do you do that?

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

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9 posted 2003-12-09 12:12 PM


I am often obdurate, seldom obsequious,
occasionally obscurant, sometimes obstreperous, and most usually oppugnant and always olfactory, but I shan't be oblique, your ode oozed originality, an opulent opuscule.

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10 posted 2003-12-09 12:13 PM


I am often obdurate, seldom obsequious,
occasionally obscurant, sometimes obstreperous, and most usually oppugnant and always olfactory, but I shan't be oblique, your ode oozed originality, an opulent opuscule.

and apparently repetitive.

[This message has been edited by Tim (12-09-2003 12:15 AM).]

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11 posted 2003-12-09 02:53 AM


wow
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12 posted 2003-12-09 07:54 AM


LOL at that reply Tim, BRAVO!

steve, loved your lit allit too


thanks everyone for taking a moment to wade through these wicked word wallows (I can't help myself )

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13 posted 2003-12-09 11:24 AM


Oh...this is awesome!

Eric

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14 posted 2003-12-09 11:30 AM


thanks, Eric

it was a fun write

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15 posted 2003-12-09 01:48 PM


Now that's the way to wake us all up LOL, bet that took some thinking or a darn good dictionary.  Tim's resposne is too cute too.
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16 posted 2003-12-16 01:44 AM


This was really showing off -- hee, hee, hee.  No, really, its great!


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17 posted 2003-12-16 01:47 AM


LOL, thanks for making ME laugh again, Iliana. Yes, it was a bit showy.
Just my way of reminding myself I really DID go to college years ago!

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