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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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0 posted 2003-12-06 07:20 AM


You walk through thoughts
Leaving traces you’ve been and left
Your footsteps imprinting memories
Beautiful body leaving scent.

Your spoken words of love
Recorded, waiting my arrival
Enchant my heart
As once heard, fill my soul
With happiness never felt.

Deeper into fantasy I ride
Taken further to thoughts of you
Flown higher than heaven
Lower then the starry sky
Into an paradise created for me
A Place filled with beauty and peace.

Lost from all the hurt and pain
Found by the happiness
The happiness of been one with you
Till the day heaven calls my name.

[This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (12-06-2003 09:47 AM).]

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-12-06 10:53 AM


"Till the day heaven calls my name."

~ What a lovely way of putting it! A very memorable line!

Great to see you posting again, Lee! I have been wondering where you have been! Hope all has been well in your corner of the world!

I enjoyed your "Thoughts of" her!


EA

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-12-06 01:02 PM


I guess it can happen...good write, very hopeful for a loner like me
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