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Open Poetry #30

What I Wish

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2003-11-23 08:40 PM

Shot out from the darkness,
Dirty black river to get me through this.
All my words start to reveal,
Exactly just how I feel.
I wanna do this on my own,
Complete emotion I've never shown.
No mercy left there for me,
If once into your eyes I could see.
Drawing the last line,
See you glisten and shine.
You are the one who sets me free,
Build a bridge to your mind,
Where our love is I'll find.
To see your picture makes me long for your touch,
Wishing to be near you oh so much.
This is what I wish...
To be with you for all time.

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies. Dimmu Borgir

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-11-23 08:58 PM

"To see your picture makes me long for your touch,
Wishing to be near you oh so much.
This is what I wish...
To be with you for all time."

Beautiful, positive ending to this one Kyle.
Much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

2 posted 2003-11-23 11:14 PM

Beautifully said, and a sentiment that rings so true.

~~J

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2003-11-24 03:52 PM

I know that wish... and you wrote it well! *S*

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