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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence 
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empty thorns suck on crimson red. thirst of a river to become solid. to create a wait from nothing, never fed starving forms linger, the remains of a wait is powerful, is nothing-strong… moist of a tongue ignites dry stickiness the rain can’t fill the cracks between fingers. patience divided by number resembles negativity left of zero under the surface the water is restricted to frameless rage and softness how deep is cold enough for a shape of its own |
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lil' Angel Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116 |
great poem
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I ran across one of your earlier poems, and immediately looked up your others. Your talent is well nigh genius. Will be looking forward to more in the future. Great write. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I agree, Steavenr...that's exactly what I did when I discovered this character. We've got a live one here! Truly original voices are something to treasure. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you make me sit here with my mouth dropped open till I start to dribble |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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