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Ada'doLisdo'ti
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0 posted 2003-12-04 12:48 PM


Lost in a blissful dreaming,
Just able to catch a gleeming.
Of a beautiful seeming,
That has me leaning.
On the edge of reality,
Don't want it coming back to me.
Don't wake me up can't you see,
How peaceful I get to be.
While I lie here and peacefully dream.

Yet you must wake me, sleep in my eyes.
Oh how greatly I do despise,
This horrid sunrise.
Even though it's no suprise.
Dragging my from my fantasy,
I want to stay there endlessly.
Peacefully dream for eternity,
Never this world to return to me.

Forever let me be lost in me blissful dreaming....

The sweetest rose is one you'll die for...

© Copyright 2003 Albert D Lopez - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-12-04 12:50 PM


Albert, this reads like a song...I love this!
Ada'doLisdo'ti
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2 posted 2003-12-04 01:05 PM


Thx..Just a morning sonnet in memory of my dreams
Martie
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3 posted 2003-12-04 01:21 PM


This sounds like the kind of dream that should be lived.
Ada'doLisdo'ti
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4 posted 2003-12-04 01:38 PM


I live the dream but always fear the awakening...thx

The sweetest rose is one you'll die for...

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 2003-12-04 10:31 PM


Dream on if it inspires great poety as this..

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-12-05 12:34 PM


Enjoyed...James
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