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She doesn't speak to me
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She doesn't speak to me |
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Keth Junior Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 14 |
She doesn't speak to me Her head is filled A thousand needles stinging at once One must bring salvation I don't think it will happen She doesn't speak to me Her mind is sealed An endless paper wall of fear One must bring a knife I don't think it will happen. She doesn't speak to me Her heart is closed The key she needs was thrown away One must bring an axe I don't think it will happen. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you never know...give it a try |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If it takes an axe, then use an axe, Dear Keth! Get those lines of communication open again! Healing hugs, EA |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
very interesting and though provoking piece, i look forward to reading more of your talented pennings. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I know exactly how exasperating this can be. Excellent write. hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Enjoyed |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
In my thoughts this tells mee.. She is thinking, but why dont you ask or confront her, same time i feel like, scared to opne the wounds taht is so deep taht they might not be recovered. Liked the poem, but my prayers you get it going again. Smile Jes |
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