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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 2003-11-23 06:26 PM

~* Winter's First Kiss *~

In such gay abandon
with dripping lashes
so soaking wet in wonder,
she leaves her winter kisses
on gold and crimson ground
beneath dancing feet.

Her virgin beauty cloaked in
sparkling crystals
giggles and tickles
leaving no spot untouched,
or habitant untold.

All the while,
with excited misted breath
she darts through dark looming clouds
on summer’s warmed tanned flesh
causing fall color
to quiver and shiver.

Prematurely she
sets into preparation,
whispering frosty promises
to lay down a snowy sheet,
and crystal beaded quilt
to safeguard springs tender keep.

~* Look Out!Here she comes! *~

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (11-23-2003 06:30 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-11-23 06:30 PM

Lovely Sharon...perfectly penned!
Hugs~

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2003-11-23 06:42 PM

Very6 nice, Sharon. I felt that winters first kiss, today.

lil' Angel
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since 2003-11-14

Posts 116

3 posted 2003-11-23 07:01 PM

I enjoyed that poem it was very good.

Varuch Elohim
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since 2003-11-10

Posts 41
Italy

4 posted 2003-11-23 07:22 PM

Very pretty and very wintery poem. Well done!

Varuch

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2003-11-23 11:10 PM

Sharon~

Winter is kissing us as I speak.....such a lovely gift hugsss lady
Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2003-11-23 11:45 PM

I thank you so much for responding to this, as I was having fun with Photoshop trying to make her look like she was leaving winter as she ran (not to successfully but it was fun!) Bundle up she is a coming that is for sure brrrrr (got my fireplace on here tonight and just loving it.)

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (11-24-2003 01:42 AM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-11-24 12:23 PM

I'm looking...James

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

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8 posted 2003-11-24 01:10 AM

Specifically liked the following:

"whispering frosty promises
to lay down a snowy sheet,
and crystal beaded quilt"

Beautiful imagery.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2003-11-24 12:42 PM

James Michael - bet you seldom see snow where you are, and here I am in a state of can't wait! Thanks for reading.

Steavenr - thanks kindly for your comments, and so nice to meet you - that is what I love of this place, always meeting new folks all the time.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2003-11-27 09:30 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Sharon, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I love the winter as I love all seasons and it is just magical what every season can bring, with its own special blessing! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

pammy
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since 2003-11-27

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California

11 posted 2003-11-27 11:08 PM

this is a great poem and it allowas a great visualization. i can picture it all happening in my mind.
~Pammy~

passing shadows
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displaced

12 posted 2003-11-28 03:27 AM

splendid! just lovely!

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

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Ontario, Canada

13 posted 2003-11-28 06:46 AM

Wonderfully descriptive Sharon! I really enjoyed the visuals in this. Knowing how cold it is here, I can see where you drew your inspiration from in this piece. A crackling fire beside me would be a lovely thing right about now.

Best wishes and hugs from a shivering friend,
/Kit

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

14 posted 2003-11-28 08:31 AM

Sharon...

Exquisite imagery...I enjoyed the feeling even if I know I'll never have "the real thing" down here. And, I love the image as well (isn't Photoshop fun?!?) Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

15 posted 2003-11-28 12:25 PM

I better be careful what I wish for, those raindrops out there are getting slower and slower, and that means SNOW! It is finally hitting us here in the West, and my knee says it is going to be one long, cold winter LOL. Thanks everyone!

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