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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-12-02 07:54 PM



I saw you standing
almost said hello
then I remembered
I am better off
with you gone

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

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1 posted 2003-12-02 09:29 PM


KristieSue~
Sadly, sometimes the intuition is correct~
Poignant penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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2 posted 2003-12-02 10:18 PM


so much said in so little words!
Felt the emotion of the poem.
Short, bitter sweet and full of truth.
pictureme :-)

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3 posted 2003-12-03 02:55 AM


lend me some of that strength you have, ey?
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4 posted 2003-12-03 08:41 AM


wish I could, but I barely have enough for myself there sis...

All I can give you is this.  Remember the pain.  Bring the pain back up.  Support of friends and muster up the anger AGAIN...

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

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