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Open Poetry #30

April

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-12-02 03:53 AM

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The sun was sizzling like the grill
In the back of the busy deli,
While perspiring cars slowly climbed uphill
Like Lilliputs on Gulliver’s belly.

As though some maiden basked in the sky,
With a golden ring in her navel,
The melting snowman gazed up, awry,
At the first warm caresses of April.

*I know I'm a bit early on this one... but I hate the cold weather, and I'm really looking forward to spring. :)

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-12-02 07:48 AM

nicley done!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-12-02 07:49 AM

I'm right there with ya on that note...

Wonderfully written!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-12-02 10:58 AM

Master~
You're never too early with APRIL for me~

This is stunningly creative~
To quote specific lines would detract from the all of it~
Sooooooo ... I will enjoy it time and time again~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-12-02 12:53 PM

you and me both

good write

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