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PseudoPoet
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since 2003-11-23
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0 posted 2003-11-23 04:15 PM


This season is mad,
brilliantly insane.

We've forgiven it
for it's meretricious
demeanor.

Overthrown
by nature.

We have been
cautioned about
the blizzard,
and it's lunacy.

But I,
have chosen
to keep cool..
by courteous invitation,

I bid welcome.

For a mad season
tells the best tale..




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Greeneyes
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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2003-11-23 04:25 PM


I really found this to be an interesting piece of merging life and nature...


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-11-23 04:26 PM


PseudoPoet
Interesting read.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-11-23 04:27 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
What a fantastic entrance you have made.
I look forward to reading more of your words.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Varuch Elohim
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since 2003-11-10
Posts 41
Italy
4 posted 2003-11-23 04:28 PM


Great work! I found your poem very interesting. Thanks for the great read! Look forward to more of your work.

Varuch Elohim

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2003-11-23 04:38 PM


You keep cool and the poem IS cool!

Welcome to Passions!

Love, Margherita

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2003-11-23 06:20 PM


made me smile...I like storms (especially snow) so they can warn me of as many as they like..

M

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 2003-11-23 07:32 PM


Very nice work!

"When your life is tossed and turning
And you are on the raging sea I'll come and pull you from the water Then you will know that you are free" - MWS

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2003-11-23 07:44 PM



Indeed it does.  Welcome to Passions!  
I have a feeling you're going to fit right in!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
9 posted 2003-11-23 08:00 PM


Pour out your soul as many times as you wish..we will eat it all up...come back for a second helping to be placed in our poets dish...


WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~ARH

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mytuesdaywishes
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since 2003-09-05
Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox
10 posted 2003-11-23 08:23 PM


amen to that

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

Temptress
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11 posted 2003-11-24 03:04 AM


just WOW
and
WELCOME!

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!


passing shadows
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displaced
12 posted 2003-11-24 03:25 AM


Welcome To Passions!

Nice write!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
13 posted 2003-11-25 10:21 PM


An enjoyable look at the season.
WELCOME! I almost missed your beautiful entrance!

steavenr
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14 posted 2003-11-26 12:33 PM


Nice poem. Welcome. Will be looking for your next one.
Mistletoe Angel
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15 posted 2003-11-27 05:35 PM






(smiles) This is a wonderfully vibrant debut, sweet friend, this reminded me of a matchbox twenty song by the same title:

Do you think you can cope,
you figured me out.
That I'm lost and I'm hopeless,
I'm bleeding and broken,
Though I've never spoken,
I come undone,
In this mad season..."


This is marvelous, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and...Happy Thanksgiving to you and all your loved ones! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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