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Not as if it matters
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Not as if it matters |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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It’s not as if it matters whether right, wrong, half and half, or how the many pieces don’t fit within a square or a circle elongated or just plain and simply round. It’s not as if it matters whether real, dream, fantasy, or a particle of brain sent to scout for new terrain for destined all are we sooner, later, in good time, to profit from a fall. And I fell that day, or slipped, or teetered like a drunk in rain or just plain and simply walked into the feel of you and I devoid of earthly pride. But it’s not as if it matters if the garden’s left untilled for over edges grows the grass both here and thereabouts and forms a happy landing place for flesh turned energy. Smiling faces I can see and how beautiful the day when all that matters most to me matters to you too! Helen / 1 December 2003 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helen~ This is softly BEAUTIFUL~ 'when all that matters most to me matters to you too!' Oh yes ... makes all the difference in this world~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen...A lovely, thoughtful poem. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Helen! This is simply beautiful! Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Wow, I'm not exactly sure what "warm and fuzzy" means when I hear people use the phrase, but this poem may have done that to me. Does it pass? Is there something I should take for it?  )) |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you so much Marge, Martie, and Enchantress for your kind comments and icebox, thank you, you made me laugh first thing in the morning. Nope, there's no cure for "warm and fuzzy" because it's like ivy - once planted it just grows and grows and clings to brick walls until "life", for some reason or other, decides it's time to prune and trim. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
certainly beautiful...I enjoyed |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you, passing shadows. I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and how beautiful the day when all that matters most to me matters to you too! Indeed! *S* I like this very much, Honeybunch! *S* |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you, suthern, for taking the time to read and to comment. Much appreciated. |
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