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titch k
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0 posted 2003-12-01 03:32 PM


Black  onyx, redeeming yourself, ten thousand eyes;
Year after year in darkness, and unuttered despair
Where is love, if not like a spirit founded
Like a spring, in an arid and barren dessert
Which neither vanish, nor pass away;
Commanding itself, like fortresses,
or flippant as waving sleeves;
Or guests seated without contempt, at a table;
Hunger sufficed, without Oxen laid bare

I ask you of this, putting down my oar;
The stream, under the far of sky;
The shadows soothing, lifting a tear,
under sheltered laughing moon;
Let none dispute love made
in heaven, firing alters as Seasons end;
Of Gods and heroes, lies swallowed up;
The smile among the flowers

The virginal Iris, forming purely consistent,
as infernal and heavenly faces;
Of the same divine power, idealizing,
as mankind's fragrant hands prepare;
Diverting themselves hardy;
Foolishly composed,  heavily
separated, of unequal reeds !
With sentence lesser, overruled by Heavens

....Where is the love?

Titch

Edited by titch on Nov. 13 2003,09:40


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-12-01 03:53 PM


You write expansively with style and grandure and bigger than life!


Love
Where is the love? In your heart!

titch k
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2 posted 2003-12-01 05:34 PM


hi Earth angel
oh yes - aint it just! SMILE in the heart
warm blessings
Titch

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3 posted 2003-12-02 08:39 PM


I'm agreeing with the angel...

your writing is amazingly expressive, and the metaphor is very well played out.

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