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Open Poetry #30

Promises

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-12-01 12:49 PM

Softly,
now I come
to breathe…
your sweet
scent of
Infinity.

The Light,
the love,
the brief exchange…
of hearts
as One
eternally.

Sensing now
your inner
soul…
my life
is yours
forevermore.

Hold me
sweetly
in your embrace...
let me taste
the kiss of
immortality.

Together
we will
swiftly fly…
to the ends
of time in
eternity.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Guardurthoughts
Member

since 2001-10-16

Posts 66

1 posted 2003-12-01 01:40 AM

This poem was very gentle and full of feelings. If I can love just once with that intensity....thanks for the write.

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~

"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-12-01 02:07 AM

Silky...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-12-01 03:39 AM

it sounds like a dream

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2003-12-01 08:57 AM

Wow, jaicie, these are some promises!
You shine.
Love, Margherita

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

5 posted 2003-12-01 10:46 AM

Thank you everyone for replying. It makes my day to know that someone enjoyed my art.

Guard...yeah, wouldn't we all like to love with that intensity! Still looking for it myself.

James..back atcha', big guy!

passing...that's exactly what it is -- a dream; but, a nice one...huh?

Margherita...dear one...promises that hopefully will shortly come true for each of us. And...I sincerely try to keep the "shine" polished <--been a rough one lately, though...so, thank you for noticing!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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