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GG
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Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-11-30 03:19 AM



Just been more dizzy lately
Falling down a lot...

And I let my face
Sink to the floor
Tears can roll
Because to stand
Only means to
Fall.

When I do
Pull myself
Past the several tries I make
Joints give way
And pain breaks through
What I can take.

I’ve just been dizzier
And in a lot of pain...
But I know there are others
With more reason to complain.


He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-11-30 03:29 AM


Alyssa, my heart aches for you sweetheart...I wish I could do something for you
GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
2 posted 2003-12-01 05:38 AM


Dix,
don't worry... you are one of few, so thank you so much . . .

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
3 posted 2003-12-01 12:53 PM


~Nods~
I know...
Liked this alot.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-12-01 01:02 PM


Alyssa, when I started reading your poem I thought that it was emotional pain that was overwhelming you, but as I read on it became apparent to me, that you are suffering real physical pain.

It pains me to know you are in pain! I am puttin my arms around you and sending you some healing love and comfort.

Healing lights & hugs,
Linda

GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
5 posted 2003-12-01 02:03 PM


koko,
I'm sorry that you do know. thanks...

Linda,
It is nothing new to me, just annoying. Actually its gone on bad enough, for long enough now that my body's dopamine has kicked into overdrive and it doesn't hurt anymore if I do something like burn my finger on the stove... so it has a plus. Just gets you down the days you can't function 'normally' and people get mad at you for it. Thank you for your kindness I seem rather longwinded... hugs

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-12-01 02:23 PM


Alyssa, just remember that we are all here for you! You can vent, scream, moan and groan ~ and we'll send you all the love that you can handle! Kiss the pain good-bye, Dear One!


EA

GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
7 posted 2003-12-01 11:17 PM


Linda,
lol I think I already do that... I complain, lots! But thank you very much, means alot

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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