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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-11-30 02:16 AM

He laughs

laughs

ignores
my weeping

all he
does
is
laugh..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-11-30 02:23 AM

Meghan, weeping for a man is most always done in vain, but necessary sometimes

WildPoet
Member

since 2003-11-10

Posts 205
California

2 posted 2003-11-30 02:44 AM

Very rich for so few words!
You can cry on MY shoulder,

WildPoet

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-11-30 02:52 AM

yea....
I know.
ugh!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

4 posted 2003-12-05 09:29 PM

   I could feel the rain in this one ....

              sorry it took so long to offer my dry yet
              comforting shoulder.


I liked the emotions that rolled with your words.

Obscurity
Member

since 2003-12-04

Posts 153
In A Melancholic Dream

5 posted 2003-12-05 10:31 PM

You know... I may be a man, but I can understand the melancholy of this poem. Ive found that tears are the only thing that can represent the true feelings of our hearts, and its shocking and sad at the same time. I feel for you...

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2003-12-05 10:52 PM

i am sorry he laughs...i shall weep with you...h

pictureme
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2003-12-05 11:15 PM

the salt in the tears, touched a wound in my heart. Sometimes we have to cry ourself dry!
pictureme :-)

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-12-08 01:30 PM

A sense of humor is a big attraction,
only to come back and haunt me later.
Gawd, do I understand this!!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2003-12-08 01:47 PM

Exquisite write!!
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

Keth
Junior Member

since 2003-11-10

Posts 14

10 posted 2003-12-08 02:46 PM

wow...just a few words but an enormous picture. great :P

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

11 posted 2003-12-09 11:28 AM

Whew...!!!

Eric

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

12 posted 2003-12-09 12:04 PM

smack him, little sister

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

13 posted 2003-12-14 07:25 PM

aw, so few words...hah, and faulkner thought big words meant big emotions, how wrong he was.

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

14 posted 2003-12-14 07:47 PM

K- You are emotionally healthy. He is scared. Great depiction! ~K~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

15 posted 2003-12-15 12:18 PM

This alone
can make ones
eyes burn
from unshed tears.

Well done, Meghan

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