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the earth's sky |
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the ant Junior Member
since 2003-11-30
Posts 18ca, usa |
Sitting on the porch cars fly by eating watermelon in the heat its humid sticky the sky is neon green the stars will fall tonight... Once again sitting on the porch there is no more breeze the air is still still sticky with sweat from the humidity we breathe heavy and forceful our eyes widen to the sights we see No more cars whizzing by Just large rocks from the earth's sky We know we can't help it so we sit and watch no more cars as we sit beneath the sky... Sitting still beneath the black sky neon no more just dark and empty Looking at the stars filled with love and child-like wonderment The watermelon has been eaten refreshed and alive We think of the universe as we think of ourselves believing in our hearts that we aren't divide |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions  Interesting first post.... |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i am a porch ass, and this poem makes simple sense, dig it, ya got kids, ,maybe it's time to go "camping" kindly, redheart |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Okay, ant... First...welcome to PiP...it's a neat place. Now...about the poem...your profile says CA...but, the poem has FL "smeared" all over it! LOL But, I sure did enjoy the imagery. Nice first post...thank you. I will look forward to more. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi and Welcome to Passions.....We are so glad you are here....this is a wonderful first post... please check your email for a special greeting Kindly Greeneyes~ I had a dream last night |
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the ant Junior Member
since 2003-11-30
Posts 18ca, usa |
thank you for the warm welcomes. i appreciate it. and I am amazed at how fast one replies here. I look forward to reading and sharing. peace. .ant. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Welcome to Passions and thanks for opening another window for us all...one sees the reason behind your pseudo, the ant, from the poem here...I think  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Welcome to PIP... You've got a vivid mind, as I can tell.. Great write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lol, enjoyed this playfully serious look at life as it whizzes past you. WELCOME!  [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (11-30-2003 08:46 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi! Welcome to Passions! Enjoyed your first post very much! I look forward to seeing more or your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ To love and be loved |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this wonderful sunny slice of life you've let sing in this wonderful debut, dearest friend, know the world always sings with you, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Pammy, we all love you so much, and...Happy Thanksgiving to you and all your loved ones! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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