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pictureme
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0 posted 2003-11-29 12:37 PM


Carpe diem, quam minimum credula postero
*
If only one day you had left to breathe
what would out of this day you squeeze?
a little more laughter, a little more fun,
a little less pain and plenty more sun.
*
Hugging your children, loving your best,
smelling the flowers and touching the rest.
Indulging in food thats not the best,
living each moment just where your at.
*
Using two fingers calling the birds,
feeling the music and reading the word.
Laughing and dancing without a care,
hands touched and knee in prayer?
*
So let the morale be big to you in carol,
CARPE DIEM, QUAM MINIMIN CREDULA POSTERO.
*

© Copyright 2003 M. Freeman - All Rights Reserved
ecrivan
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1 posted 2003-11-29 12:42 PM


nicely thought provoking for a first, may other observations flow from your pen, welcome to Passions, where you can enjoy a variety of talent


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2 posted 2003-11-29 12:43 PM


Hi and welcome, we are excited you have joined our family....This is a wonderful first post,& you will fit in nicely here...so make your self at home, take a look around, we have much to offer...and enjoy your stay....

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please check your email for a special greeting

Kindly~

Greeneyes~

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I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-11-29 01:45 AM


Beautiful, uplifting, thoughts to boost the happy factor...loved it! Nice to read!

Love,
Terri~

lil' Angel
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4 posted 2003-11-29 02:16 AM


What an excellent poem.  Welcome to passions.   I look foward to reading more of your poems.
passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-11-29 04:19 AM


Excellent! We all could use the reminder!

Welcome To Passions Thanks for the uplifting write!

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-11-29 10:40 AM


This is a very beautiful first post.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
And welcome to Passions!!

  

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2003-11-29 10:54 AM


Welcome to Passions.
Enjoyed the depth of thought in your first post. Looking forward to more.
ThisDiamond

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8 posted 2003-11-29 10:57 AM





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9 posted 2003-11-29 02:07 PM






(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, I love this upbeat and determined debut, sweet friend, yay, may all the children of the world embrace the day and release balloons to the heavens above knowing they'll make it all the way there! God Bless You I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Enchantress
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10 posted 2003-11-29 02:22 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Very nice and uplifting entrance you have made.
I'm sure you will enjoy yourself here.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ To love and be loved
is to feel the sun from both sides ~

Magnus
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11 posted 2003-11-29 02:26 PM


This is an awesome write....very well done
and flows impeccably...  Thank you for
sharing it with us...and welcome to Passions,  may your stay be enjoyable.

Martie
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12 posted 2003-11-29 10:02 PM


I enjoyed your First Post and the tenderness with which it was written.  Welcome!
pictureme
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13 posted 2003-11-29 10:15 PM


Thanks to everyone for the nice welcome and kind thoughts. Look forward to reading and sharing. Seems like a great site with some wonderful people. Thanks everyone.
Keep writing and posting and keeping poetry alive!

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2003-11-30 12:36 PM


PictureMe~
Indeed, a hearty WELCOME to Passions~

Enjoyed the read of tender and wise thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

jaicie114
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15 posted 2003-11-30 12:41 PM


Thank you, pictureme...

This was a very nice first post. I look forward to more.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Daniel Michael
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16 posted 2003-11-30 09:15 AM


Excellent, uplifting. Dan
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17 posted 2003-11-30 09:39 AM


An enjoyable read!

WELCOME!

Ratleader
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18 posted 2003-12-01 10:15 PM


Solid! Hard to beat a first post like this one.

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the_loner_23
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19 posted 2003-12-01 10:16 PM


Awesome first poem. Welcome to Passions!!!!!

Cold hands means a warm heart

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