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Open Poetry #30

The Butterfly Effect

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2004-01-24 01:15 PM

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     a stirring
        endless movement
        softly spoken

   out of nowhere,
     into somewhere

     from cello
        to 1001 strings

   in one breath
      a startled inhale
      without release

     captivated

        the heart flutters
        aching in need

   for it to settle
      by your loving touch

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One's outlook can be another's expression.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-01-24 01:19 PM

excellent! imagery is awesome!

...can't have a fluttering heart for too long, can we?

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2004-01-24 01:22 PM

... it reminds me of being Air Sick ...   lol

        *S      xoxox   thanks Dixie!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-01-24 04:00 PM

(smiles) I'm certainly not going to see the movie (I heard it was disappointing) but your poem by far surpasses the movie's quality, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2004-01-24 04:21 PM

Nice...James

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