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Open Poetry #30

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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-01-24 12:19 PM

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

1 posted 2004-01-24 12:21 PM

I like this.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-01-24 12:23 PM

Snow, this was soooo lovely and full of passion.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2004-01-24 01:18 AM

"cobalt dreams and salt kisses"

lovely line for a very lovely verse.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

4 posted 2004-01-24 01:23 AM

and i wear hope
i adored this...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-01-24 11:55 AM

LadySnow~
My god, this is GORGEOUS~

You are extremely talented and it's a pure pleasure to read your visualization of thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-01-24 01:24 PM

awesome! just gorgeous! something I could make poster size, print out, and hang on the wall...yes

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