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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-01-23 08:31 AM


Wouldst thou comest now
to softly steal mine heart?
And once upon a time
when thou hast stolen mine heart,
wouldst thou also givest to me
an everlasting and eternal love?

Wouldst thou let me see thy love
shining from thine heart?
Wouldst thou look deeply into mine eyes
and see the love that shineth
from mine soul?

Wouldst thou let me love thee
for an eternity?
Wouldst thou please comest now.....
and softly steal mine heart?


(slightly revised)



How can love just stop?
Somebody tell me,
help me understand...

{Trace Adkins}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-23-2004 10:09 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-01-23 08:35 AM



Very tender.
So good to see you posting
more frequently!

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-01-23 08:39 AM


Just trying to get on with things Kari...hugs and thanks.
SimplyGold
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3 posted 2004-01-23 09:19 AM


Very tender and touching. Enjoyed!

SG

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4 posted 2004-01-23 09:23 AM


awwww sweet sister...touching but you know that right? beautiful

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

vandana
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5 posted 2004-01-23 09:41 AM


nice read
Ravenwolfvoyager
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6 posted 2004-01-23 09:58 AM


A beautiful write my friend. Thou flows with the tranquility from thine hearts brim. An astonishing piece beautifully placed together.  
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7 posted 2004-01-23 12:44 PM


I love it!
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8 posted 2004-01-23 01:09 PM


a beautiful tender offer
thank you for sharing the gentleness of your heart

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9 posted 2004-01-24 05:53 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is precious, sweet friend, may your heart forever glow with warmth and joy of love and be stolen only with care! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, swet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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10 posted 2004-01-24 06:06 PM


So tenderly penned...love it

Charisma

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