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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-01-22 06:35 AM


Waking suddenly, half remembered dreams rose into his conciousness.
Snapshots of past memory falshed into his brain, like a cheap camera flash.

Screams and shrieks  proceeded, till he could stand it no more, holding his ears.

Heart pounding, calmness washed over him, and the screams died down.

Reaching back into his youth, alive his childhood was awakened.
Different times, idoly spent catching butterflies, just to look at the delicate colour of their wings, before freeing them again.

Hot warm days of innocence, flashed back to him. Closing his eyes he saw again the amber days of blinding sun, the perfect blueness of the sky.

Shouting, he attempted to make the people in his memory hear him, but they were lost forever, gone.

Alone he was, calling out to his past and asking,
''which way now'', he could see their mouth's moving, but could not here the words, he had lost that ability now.

Then one motioned with his finger, pointing upwards, he looked up and his head spun, till he lost conciousness.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2004-01-24 12:08 PM


Great writing, I liked the way you incorporated your childhood experiances inside, making this so personal....

You should write a book~

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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