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Marsha
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0 posted 2003-11-28 08:04 AM



He Writes
Especially for YOU

He writes, and his words flow with grace
And leave within my soul a trace
It’s the softest hint of the lover’s sigh
Or perhaps the sound of a sorrow’s cry
His words curl around me in garlands bright
They carry within the promise of light
He writes and I catch my breath to read
Then follow his footsteps where e’re they lead

He writes, words that dance across my eyes
Filling my mind with such sweet surprise
I’m led onward into realms of dream
Where mysteries remain forever unseen
His words caressing my skin with heat
Making me gasp and my pulse to beat
He writes and those words drape o’re me
Filling my mind with hopes certainty

He writes, and the words gleam brightly
Falling on my soul in layers lightly
I read and they brush through my mind
Revealing secrets that I sought to find
My eyes shine in their glorious light
Then my soul dances in sheer delight
He writes and I hear their whispered plea
Carried into the very depths of me

He writes, and those words hold me bound
Captured by their clear bell like sound

Marsha

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

© Copyright 2003 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-11-28 08:17 AM


Marsha
Glad to see you posting again. You are an excellent writer.

jaicie114
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2 posted 2003-11-28 08:51 AM


Marsha...

I know this song...thank you for reminding me with such lyrical words.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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3 posted 2003-11-28 09:06 AM


Hi Marsha!
So good to read you once again!
And, this is a perfectly lovely post!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ To love and be loved
is to feel the sun from both sides ~

Magnus
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4 posted 2003-11-28 09:13 AM


Mushy,  good to see ya here ...  at your own
pace...  Nicely done darling girl....very
nicely done...

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2003-11-28 09:22 AM


DarlingMarshaLove~
The joy of life knows you well, dear~
The beauty of your thoughts is a welcomed refreshment on these pages blue~

Love you sweetie~:heartL
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

Hockeychick19
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6 posted 2003-11-28 02:27 PM


Marsha,

Beautifully done.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Aimster
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7 posted 2003-11-29 05:00 PM


sweet sis,

beautiful beautiful beautiful! you have
always been an amazing writer to me, but
sometimes you even outdo yourself, as you
clearly do here!

love you,
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-11-29 11:41 PM


wow...
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9 posted 2003-11-30 12:17 PM


This is one that makes me wish I had your talent for writing responses... for it deserves one more worthy than I'm capable of. *S* Beautiful work, Mushy one... hugs!
SharaRose
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10 posted 2003-11-30 12:40 PM


Words can do so much. They can hurt, they can harm, but the ones that are sweet linger with a power to hold the other so dear. That's what this write made me think of, and I write what I think. Thank you for sharing. Nice to read!
Love,
Terri~

vandana
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11 posted 2003-11-30 12:47 PM


nice
Balladeer
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12 posted 2003-11-30 07:36 PM


An exquisite testimonial, mushy one. I think every poet or writer alive would like to have that said about him/her. The way that you have sculptured and constructed the poem gives it good impact on the reader. Wonderful job....but then it's from your pen, isn't it?
Suetang
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13 posted 2003-11-30 07:53 PM


Hello Marsha

This was absolutely fabulous and it is so nice to read your words again.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

EagleOne
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14 posted 2003-11-30 11:02 PM


No one does this quite like you can. Excellent!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

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