»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #30
»
My Dilemma
| Open Poetry #30 |
|
My Dilemma |
|
|
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I have all the answers you may ever wish to know Small ones, great ones, least ones, best ones Though upon reflection one thing still does show With all the answers that I have…I still don’t know the questions. [This message has been edited by steavenr (01-20-2004 10:14 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2004 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
The ever-elusive question to your answers: "Why?" -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
||
|
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Steavenr -- My Dad used to always say, "the more I know, the less I know." Your poem made me think of that. Thanks for the memory through your well-penned verse.  |
||
muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Love it! this brought a *giggle* out of me... not "at" you, just "with" you just make someone angry, you'll get the "20 questions"! anyways...Mark stated it well... thats the only question anyone ever really cares to hear an answer to...the "why" i really enjoyed this  |
||
|
Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
An interesting paradox and a great write. Thank you. |
||
|
chrissydome Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73germany |
makes me think of douglas adams' "the hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy"... :-) turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again... |
||
|
jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Don't know how I missed this one this long, steavenr...as always, such a delight. I can sooooo relate! Thanks! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
||
|
Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
In a word...Brilliant! Now I will explain (because in case you haven't figured this out by now, I have more to say about everything!) LOL I have said this before many times...my writing provides me with answers to questions I never knew I had. This poem so reminded me of why I write. Some say they always know where they are going when they pick up their pen. Most times, I have no idea. A line will come in or sometimes an image and then the answers will unfold...yet I never knew I had a question until the words are on the page. This is a must keep in the library, my friend. Uhhh, can you tell how much I love this? Patricia |
||
|
McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
This made me laugh, is that okay? I'm feeling giddy today, I guess. I really smiled at your words. I think my six year old has all the questions, I can hook you up if you'd like! hahaha! McLean |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
