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Magic (a followup to Scorpio's Magic)
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Magic (a followup to Scorpio's Magic) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA 
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or I feel a pause within . . . without, as if you were really here. And words never come so easy that I could say them all to help you understand me or show love, most of all. Most of all. There really is some sort of magic. I used to wonder why. But now I only smile about it. That secret's best of all . . . best of all. A part of me is somewhere with you no matter where you are. Don't take that part for granted -- it will fill you fullest It's magic! [This message has been edited by iliana (01-20-2004 03:40 AM).] |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
Iliana. I see you've replied to many of my poems so when i saw your name i very quickly began to read. You have a true talent, and your words touched me! Looking soo fwd to reading more of u soon! Thanx xoxLORxox |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Serenities_Blood -- Thanks for posting and for the kind words. I really enjoy your work, too. Hugs to you and BEEEEEwell! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, iliana, I really enjoyed the magic that you penned this one with!!! You have a wonderful style, and I much enjoy reading...~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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poetically ghetto Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 100 |
your magic is alive i hope to read it all the time smoothly done |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sunnyone -- Good morning! Glad you liked it, thanks.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Poetically Alive -- thanks for reading it! What a very nice thing to say! Welcome to Passions --- I'll be looking out for yours, as well.  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
"Time never travels so quicky that your face does not appear, or I feel a pause within . . . without, as if you were really here. And words never come so easy that I could say them all to help you understand me or show love, most of all. Most of all." This could not have been expressed more clearly to allow the reader to take the idea and run with it. It brought back first memories that lingered sooooooooo long. You have a clarity about your writing that allows images to link on to it very easily. I enjoyed. Sadie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Nancy, thanks for taking the time to go back to #30 and read this one -- and to post the MAGICAL sign!  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Iliana, I'm pleased that you enjoyed my poem and that it lead you to post this wonderful write. And I do apologize for not responing earlier. believe in what your heart feels... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Scorpio, I had forgotten about my Magic until I read yours. I had written mine probably 20 years ago, but yours brought it back to life. Don't you think it's interesting how many different varieties of the same themes.... in some cases even the same titles, there are?! Thank you for taking the time to read..........I do really enjoy reading your poems. |
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