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Perfect Imperfections |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Perfect Imperfections There are things we see in ourselves That make us feel we are not perfect But what we see as imperfections Someone else might sees as special features So as you try to point out your imperfections They are things that I can't see Because you are a perfect gem to me "Everybody's lost |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love is blind, yes |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Very true and very incisive but not just in love though Dave |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So true! And, what a good write this was, as well! |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
I like the little couplet at the end and how it ends. Nice work never try to teach a pig to sing |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
You know, my husband says the same thing! This is a very knowledgable write. Good Job! McLean |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amature~ What a 'perfect' write~ I've seen this very thing over and over through the compliments I pay people ... they do not (and I'm assuming WE do not) see ourselves as others see us~ Thank you for sharing these thoughts ...~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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