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Margot
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since 2003-10-04
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0 posted 2003-11-27 06:37 PM



Song Challenge...

The song of the Mira
fills me with peace
Takes me back to simplicity
Bring me release

It helps me envision
Where my love waits for me
In a place that I know
I'll eventually be

my time is not now
But the peace in the song
Leads me to dance
And helps me be strong

so till I see him
On the Mira one day
This song brings me peace
Whenever it's played

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

© Copyright 2003 Margot Hill - All Rights Reserved
jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
1 posted 2003-11-27 11:16 PM


Margot...

This is so beautiful and haunting.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Margot
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since 2003-10-04
Posts 154

2 posted 2003-11-28 01:48 AM


jc,

Thank you very much

Margot

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-11-28 03:58 AM


I know what you mean


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