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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-01-15 11:13 AM




Momentary wave,
Sunny winds and hugging arms
Kismet kicking ken



© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-01-15 11:31 AM


BEAUTIFUL!!!!

jaicie114
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2 posted 2004-01-15 11:34 AM


Wow...Karilea...this is great!  And...Marti...look what you did!!!  Good going!  

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Martie
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3 posted 2004-01-15 11:36 AM


"Sunshine in the morning makes me happy"


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4 posted 2004-01-15 01:04 PM



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5 posted 2004-01-15 01:18 PM


yep, we gots sunshine this a.m., too, soft blue sky edged in deciduous lace, snow covered roof tops and icicle laden eaves

like your senyru, much!

ah, though a momentary wave, it's a lovely sight

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Sadelite
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6 posted 2004-01-15 02:22 PM


Darling poem.   (Sunshine, will you do me the favor of re-reading my poem about the father/daughter dance.  I DO NOt want to send it back up again, but would like you to see I got lots more of the kinks worked out, just so you could know...
                  Thanks,
                 Sadelite

richard taylor
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7 posted 2004-01-15 03:11 PM


Hi This is very clever, and the form is perfect.
well done Richard.

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