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When I Found You |
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
I wrote this poem this morning at like 5 or 6 I dunno it just popped in my head so I wrote it: enjoy comments would b nice.. I wrote this about a girl or ne girl for that matter whos fallin or is in love its how they would feel bout their guy  am I right..lol!It's late at night when I think of you, My world somehow isn't as blue, You found away in to my heart, Something new is about to start. When I see your smile, It gives me faith, When you speak my name, I get weak all over. Your eyes are magic, Putting me in your trance,your spell Your voice so sexy,tender and sweet Sending chills from my head to my feet. I want to feel your arms around me, When I touch your body hard and safe, Beneath your shirt I'll feel your heart race, The look of passion on your face. Lacing our fingsers we reach our highest peek, We find this love togehter as one, With every inch of truth told, I found the love I was looking for, The day you walked in to my life, I found so much more. © Care Strom "2004" |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Sweet. I get that warm-fuzzy feeling every morning when I wake up! McLean |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
wow wishing I was awoken the same way....sigh very nicely done... hugssss~*~ |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
A well done inspiredpoetwriter. A heart catching write that you've put much of yourself into. Thank you. |
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Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58 |
there is definitely truth in that... |
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