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Tim
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since 1999-06-08
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0 posted 2004-01-13 12:23 PM


Who can hear the night and taste the dawn?
Or see the wind and smell a star?
Or feel the touch of someone’s smile?
Not I…

Unless upon a dawning’s breeze
I gaze upon a star
In fade of dark of summer night
With you close by my side.

© Copyright 2004 Tim - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2004-01-13 03:36 AM


wonderfully romantic
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-01-13 08:44 AM



Oh, give it to her...*smiling*

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-01-13 08:49 AM


How lovely...
reads like a Valentine.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

McLean
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since 2004-01-05
Posts 484
state of marital bliss
4 posted 2004-01-13 09:54 AM


The candy man can, oh, the candy man can!

This is the tune to which your poetry was read by me!  Thank you for that!

McLean

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