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nothing
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since 2004-01-10
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0 posted 2004-01-12 02:46 PM


It was a simple thing, I thought
Easy for you to see
Especially when I told you
How much you meant to me

Making sense is overrated
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since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189
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1 posted 2004-01-12 03:13 PM


simple and true,,,
sadly tho....the ones we want to feel our truth and words,,,often miss it completely
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Endlessecho
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since 2003-09-05
Posts 398
I live within myself
2 posted 2004-01-12 03:14 PM


So much said in a few words.  I really like that.  Simple and pure poetry.
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-01-12 06:12 PM


Sweet writing. I think its a real talent to say a lot in a few words, and you did!
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