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choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-01-12 11:47 AM

Etched in the dawn sky,
pink streaks breaking ashen gray
along the horizon-
the rising sun silhouettes
heads of crows on bare branches.

Terrina
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

1 posted 2004-01-12 11:51 AM

simply, beautifully said.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-01-12 12:07 PM

too beautiful

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

3 posted 2004-01-12 12:35 PM

"simply, beautifully said."

Thank you Terrina....~C

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

4 posted 2004-01-12 12:36 PM

"too beautiful"

Thank you Passing Shadow.... ~C

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2004-01-12 12:52 PM

the sun's golden shawl
upon the sweet birdies below
never complaining of feeling such cold
surely they must be tho?
yes or no?

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

6 posted 2004-01-12 01:57 PM

From Inkgoddess:

the sun's golden shawl
upon the sweet birdies below
never complaining of feeling such cold
surely they must be tho?
yes or no?

~~~~~~<@>~~~~~~

Such raging fires,
they warm the heart of winter
as birds sing-
past yes and no distinctions,
joyful for the sun's return.

~C

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2004-01-12 02:44 PM

A lovely , felt, visual
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

8 posted 2004-01-12 03:36 PM

A lovely , felt, visual
Michelle

Thank you Michelle, ~C

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2004-01-12 04:47 PM

Yes! Really fine writing!

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

10 posted 2004-01-12 04:52 PM

Great perception and well presented! I enjoyed this a lot!
Sadelite

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2004-01-12 04:53 PM

nice read

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2004-01-12 05:22 PM

I've started looking for your work... you never disappoint. *S*

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

13 posted 2004-01-12 09:18 PM

Yes! Really fine writing!

Iliana, you are so very kind! ~C

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

14 posted 2004-01-12 09:20 PM

Great perception and well presented! I enjoyed this a lot!
Sadelite

Thank you Sadelite, Its nice to meet you ~C

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

15 posted 2004-01-12 09:22 PM

nice read Thank you Vandana, ~C

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

16 posted 2004-01-12 09:25 PM

"I've started looking for your work... you never disappoint. *S*"

That's sweet Suthern...~C

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

17 posted 2004-01-14 01:00 AM

Ah, choshi, you have a gift for these....this is quality stuff!

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______________Ratleader______________

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

18 posted 2004-01-14 09:01 AM

Ah, choshi, you have a gift for these....this is quality stuff!

Thank you Ratleader....DO you play the flute? ~C

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