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when My Thoughts Turn To You
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when My Thoughts Turn To You |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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When My Thoughts TurnTo You Wondering shall I write again Its still too early to tell Nothing seems to flow Going through this dry spell Erasing the melancholy blue I need removal of doubt By whetting my appetite In words to break my drought My muse stroking word keys To excite with reaction Stimulating with offerings To the sounds of satisfaction When my thoughts turn to you Arousing me into verse You slide over my tongue I know it is your words I thirst Hope©2004 |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
This reminded me of when i was going through a dry spell and wrote "Which One Color Should I Use?" I think it is one of my better ones, although I started out with a blank, perhaps, sharing the same quest as you. (I'm not sure if it's in #30 or the archives.) In my mind I wondered how I could say the fewest words (instead of paintingwith a thousand words). I think you did a very nice job! I enjoyed this and your skills as a poet. Satelite |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I know this feeling well.  Enjoyed this write as I do all of yours Hope. hugs, Chris "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a poet always writes, even if it's not on paper, the voice is always there we just have to be still enough to hear it |
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