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Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2004-01-09 09:26 AM

I saw a dream perched on my window sill
with puppy dog eyes
pleading to be free

So many times lost dreams do haunt me
apprehension was their chains
my fear their prison

Another chance stares back at me
do I let the dream fly free
or let it fade as I have with the rest

For a moment I am left to ponder then
without rhyme or reason

I open the window and watch
as my dream takes flight
shedding caterpillar skin
for wings of a beautiful butterfly

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-01-09 11:33 AM

oh how oft we do...good write Brad

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2004-01-09 11:36 AM

I open the window and watch
as my dream takes flight
shedding caterpillar skin
for wings of a beautiful butterfly

Brad, I love this ending.
It's really pretty.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2004-01-09 11:39 AM

"So many times lost dreams do haunt me
apprehension was their chains
my fear their prison"

Loved this writing and especially those lines...

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

4 posted 2004-01-09 02:53 PM

thank you

harash
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since 2003-12-27

Posts 99
India

5 posted 2004-01-10 02:09 AM

rally a good and cool write.......

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2004-01-10 09:54 AM

Full of hope and beauty...great job!

Eric

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2004-01-10 12:40 PM

Brad - beautiful dreams should be kept and held on to, and when they seem to be coming true go for it, for if not one will never know if they are true... Nice write...

BC

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-01-10 02:42 PM

well, that makes me feel better if I think about it that way

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

9 posted 2004-01-10 02:47 PM

open the window and watch
as my dream takes flight
shedding caterpillar skin
for wings of a beautiful butterfly

Nice movement with delicate optimism.

Thank you Brad, ~C

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2004-01-10 03:13 PM

I thought I saw you flying by...
enjoyed the write, Brad.

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

11 posted 2004-01-11 01:46 AM

thank you

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