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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-01-07 12:26 PM



In a mood of passing
pleasures -

Only you remain.

And still the world continues in
its turning.

While you and I...simply watch it
as it passes.

Lost...in pleasures of our
own.


© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-07 12:28 PM


and it is only those pleasures of love that can make one happy with just sitting and watching the world pass by
Kahlil
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2 posted 2004-01-07 01:00 PM


"In a mood of passing
pleasures -

Only you remain."

Yum....~K~

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just out of reach
3 posted 2004-01-07 01:47 PM


Very nice Ericc. Enjoyable read. Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-01-07 01:47 PM


Nice one.

captures a moment of the world being somewhere and someone else.

Dave

Sunshine
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5 posted 2004-01-07 02:00 PM


Nothing simple about this...
jaicie114
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6 posted 2004-01-07 04:41 PM


ohhhhh...purrrrrr!

This is about as good as it gets!  Thank you, dear One!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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7 posted 2004-01-07 04:46 PM


Exquisitely beautiful Eric!
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Margherita
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8 posted 2004-01-07 05:24 PM


...and through this full moon night

we dance in heavenly delight

until the first glimmers of dawn

when we shall fade into the day,

in silent bliss,

simply gliding away

in the moon’s embrace ...

Oh Eric, this is so enchanting and inspiring! There is the deep perception of a space where only pure Love exists.

I love you. Margherita




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9 posted 2004-01-07 05:55 PM


sigh....such a love is beautiful....

~~**~~
This morning theres a calm I cant explain
By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone,  
I will bend light pretending it lingers on

McLean
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state of marital bliss
10 posted 2004-01-07 05:58 PM


me...JUMPING UP AND DOWN..."I've got one of those, too!"  Isn't it a great feeling, to know of this pleasure?  Excellent words!

McLean

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11 posted 2004-01-07 11:04 PM


Very nice...James
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