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Corinne
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state of confusion

0 posted 2004-01-03 09:27 PM



She is one of thousands of pebbles
swept up
on a Monrovian beach,

viewing the world
with ancient eyes.


© Copyright 2004 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-01-03 10:19 PM


Hauntingly beautiful Cor...
Beckons to read over and over
TD

Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-01-03 10:43 PM


very nice write
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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Gaia
3 posted 2004-01-04 12:49 PM


enjoyed the imagery here, and the sense of antiquity
Severn
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4 posted 2004-01-04 12:54 PM


nice to read you again Corinne...

This is haunting...glad I caught it..

K


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5 posted 2004-01-04 05:03 AM


wow...just wow
Dark Angel
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6 posted 2004-01-04 05:16 AM


Wow!

it's a keeper!

Maree

"I can't believe
I've lost the very best of me"

Natalie Merchant


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7 posted 2004-01-04 12:15 PM


OhCorinne~
You have said soooooo much in this little piece of magic~
Thoughtfully lovely dear lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

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