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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-12-30 01:17 PM



My eyes sting,
from lack of sleep,
or tears that rise
wishing to rid my body
of the evil that possesses it
or maybe feeling too alone
with my suffering.

Another day, nothing changes
except the too loud ticking of time.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-12-30 01:54 PM


tic tic tic
doesnt it sound like the loudest sound in the world some days?

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-12-30 01:58 PM


slow and loud ...when your head pounds like mine...
Happy New Year, Goddess
Mine will be spent wishing I was elsewhere in a new body with a head transplant

hugs
M

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-12-30 03:47 PM


Maureen, I understand about the loudness of time...
it can be deafening when we are waiting for something.

I also understand about the horrible pain of a headache.
I feel like I'm getting a migraine now.
I've got to lie down for awhile.
I hope your headache gets better soon.
Hugs  
Ethel

LngJhnAg
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4 posted 2003-12-30 03:49 PM


*perk*  Evil is possessing your body? *hopeful eyes*  Gimme an hour, I'll be right there!

Hang in there, Mo - Bbetter days are heading toward you even as I write.

Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-12-30 03:51 PM



That too, too sound
often hits me up side the head
at 3:00 a.m....

Sigh.

with understanding...

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2003-12-30 04:15 PM


MzWynter~
Hoping that this TOO shall pass~
Happy thoughts to you as this year nears the ending ... with wishes for much more for you in 2004~

You're a doll ... Happy New Year, hon~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2003-12-30 04:30 PM


Thank you all for the smiles you share with me...*cough cough* and the hugs...*sneeze sneeze*

can anyone tell me how long this darn flu will last...5 days now and I still feel like my head wants to fly off my shoulders (and I almost wish it would)
well at least it allows me to use it as an excuse to sit here today and read and write a bit  and wish all of you a Happy New Year...

now if only I can get some sleep~~~

and longjohn...behave yourself

M

Susan Caldwell
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8 posted 2003-12-31 10:19 AM


I had in Nov. and the fever alone lasted 6 days...hang in there...it gets better.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Goodknight
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9 posted 2003-12-31 10:24 AM


an apt poem with lots to say - however long is too too long - hope you are better soon - Paul
Martie
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10 posted 2003-12-31 10:43 AM


Maureen....Funny...I have a canary named Twotwo...Get well soon!  
BluesSerenade
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11 posted 2004-01-02 12:05 PM


Better now??  
Liked your title and this little poem you wrote.

Hugs Maur~

nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2004-01-02 12:36 PM


I am beginning to wonder if I will ever feel "better" Lori...one day I feel  alive the next...like I could just  lay down and...

hugs
M

Terrina
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13 posted 2004-01-02 02:22 PM


Why are you so sad?
I know we all have our own hells, but what is it about your flames that keep you so heated?

nakdthoughts
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14 posted 2004-01-02 05:04 PM


Terrina, I have "the flu" dear..nothing more...nothing less

*s
M

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15 posted 2004-01-03 03:10 PM


yep, I hear it on my side of the world too
Juju
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16 posted 2004-01-03 03:43 PM


I hear you...
some days feal like enternity.
Personaly I think its a curse...
having to expierence time slightly warp in our head when we happen to experience slight irritations in our lives. I'm sorry the flu is evil.


Juju

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